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The Bridge

  The wind softly blows her hair over her shoulder as she tightens her grip on the rail. The bridge is deserted just cars hastily passing by. She looks out into the Sunset, deep in thought about her life.

  no one walks this bridge for there was no sidewalks and the cars always sped on their way by. This was her bridge. This is were she went if she wanted to be alone.

  She was thin and her skin was ghostly pale. She began eating a little less and loosing weight a little more. She became apathetic and distent to everyone she loved.

  Dusk turned into night and a tear fell down her cheek. It hurt her that no one came after her. No one cared that she was out late at night. Another tear fell down her cheek as she stepped closer to the rail.

  Another car sped by. Should she do it? It wouldn’t be that hard. All she would have to do is just swing one leg over and then the other. Or she could just hop over. However it would be, it would be quick.

  Another car came but slowed down to a stop. Her mind started racing and got ready to jump. Last thing she wanted was to be stolen and raped. She should just get it over with. She wouldn’t let him have her.

  The man got out of the driver seat as his friends watched within. He didn’t say a word as he reached out his hand. All she could do was stare at it.

  She began to panic and she gripped the rail tightly swong her leg over and started to fall. Before she hit the water she thought why a stranger would want her to live and saw the man watch helplessly.

  He took one look at his friends and jumpped in after. The girl was washed to shore before she drowned and the Man got dragged under the current and died that day. At times, fate is never kind.
©2005-2009 ~bloodygoth
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this is a short story about an ironic fate. i don't write stories so go easy on me. i hope you guys like it. comments are welcomed!

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oh wow goosebumps, the last few lines kill and are true :fav:

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Oh wow...It's really short so it holds attention...You're right, fate's a real bitch. Great job for not usually writing stories!

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thanks so much for the fav! i liked how it turned out too! =D i'm really glad you liked it. makes me feel like i did a job's well done!!

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Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction.
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thanks amy. glad you liked it. :)

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holy shit!!!! I love it got the goosebumps. total fav. This is great. Terribly sad but wonderfully written. Oh my .. <3, cait
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:blushes: thanks cait. never really got a reaction like that from you before! :) i'm really glad you liked it.

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Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction.
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its good... but its sad... id really like to hear some more happy writing from you sawah :)

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=D hey how is web design goin for you?? what are you guys doin in that class. i took it tenth grade. it was alright. chederquist is weird....

we had a sub yesterday in computer graphics and i wrote this during class. our computers that he has us assigned to dont have the program working. (vector works). so yeah... i had nothing to do. but the story turned out good right?! lol. i'm proud of it. :)

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Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction.
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lol sawah!! that's cute! :aww: i know but its hard for me to write happy stuff. the only happy stuff i write is about you. :) so feel special hunni!

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