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Last Words by ~bloodygoth:iconbloodygoth:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


I would like to say
i love you.
don’t feel bad or regret anything
none of this is your fault.
carry on with your lives
don’t feel like you’re alone,
because I will still be there,
just in a different way.
Jesus came for me today
and so I took his hand
love me,
    hate me,
         remember me…
for the choice I took
and for the person I was
put a smile on your face
like there used to be
because I am just a memory away.
©2006-2009 ~bloodygoth
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Author's Comments

this is for some one special..... also for a friend of a friend RIP


through his perspective.

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~LOSTACIDjoKer Oct 3, 2006, 3:19:56 PM
interesting, there are alot of people (from my perspective) that do poems or writings from someone elses perspective in this sort of case, but yours is different in some way. Be it more peaceful and soft, or whatever, i like it either way.

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"If You Read, You Will Judge"
Make A Point->! Why Are You Violently NONviolent?
Music struggling since early '90s
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~bloodygoth Oct 3, 2006, 7:39:21 PM
thanks! i'm glad. ya i dont kno why i all of a sudden desided to write it. because its through someone else's perspective that i didnt even know but it was to my friend. idk... its weird.

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Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction.
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~DaShBoArDGrL18 Oct 3, 2006, 9:12:42 PM
this is amazing, i love it. it is perfect!
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~bloodygoth Oct 3, 2006, 10:11:31 PM
thanks. i'm really glad you like it. i like this piece too.

--
Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction.
:iconlostacidjoker:
~LOSTACIDjoKer Oct 4, 2006, 1:25:15 PM
yeah, usually around those type of situations strange things do happen like that where you just feel compelled to do something even you dont know what, it usually ends up being something that you feel comfortable doeing, for you this appears to be a poem. yeah, its oddd like thate

--
"If You Read, You Will Judge"
Make A Point->! Why Are You Violently NONviolent?
Music struggling since early '90s
:iconbloodygoth:
~bloodygoth Oct 5, 2006, 12:41:41 AM
ya i see what your saying. and i guess thats true. i never really thought about it ya kno. but its crazy and i aint complaining because i like this piece!!

--
Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction.
:iconlostacidjoker:
~LOSTACIDjoKer Oct 5, 2006, 1:37:41 PM
yep, never a good idea to complain about something you like:D

--
"If You Read, You Will Judge"
Make A Point->! Why Are You Violently NONviolent?
Music struggling since early '90s
:iconbloodygoth:
~bloodygoth Oct 6, 2006, 7:16:14 AM
hells ya. lol

--
Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction.
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